rory moon

[rory moon]

COLLEGE LIFE .

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i used to know you so well.

FULL NAME. rory esme moon

DATE OF BIRTH. August 10th

LOCAL OR YEAR IN COLLEGE. sophomore in college

PLACE OF BIRTH. richmond, virginia

PERSONALITY TRAITS.

• stubborn
  
• rude (occasionally)
  
• truly kindhearted
  
• trustworthy
  
• self-centered (sometimes)
  
• speaks before thinking
  
• obsessive
  
• caring
  
• tries to never give up
  
• fights for what she believes in
  yes, i is ten at least. please make sure at least four are bad in some way.

HISTORY.
Rory was born in Richmond, Virginia to Kadie Moon, she doesn't know who her father is because her mother refuses to tell her because she thinks it is unimportant in Rory's life. So, Rory grew up without a father and she hated it. The worst thing about it was that some kids teased her about not knowing who her father was, they also made fun of her mom. Finally, around 9th grade the kids stopped making fun of her because of that & when Rory told her mom about the things those kids had said about her (Kadie), her mom was furious. Her mom got up and started packing within a two days they moved. Apparently her mom had been planning this move for awhile ever since a mother called and cussed her out.

Rory moved to a small town in Arkansas where her cousins and other family lived. She found out she had a brother, Cory, and a sister, Tori. She hung out with Cory in school because Cory was her twin brother and they were in the same grade, obviously. Tori on the other hand was a year and a half younger but only a grade below. Rory grew up in Heber Springs, Arkanas but was born in Richmond, Virginia; so when her freshman year of college came around she went there but she didn't like the college there so she came to South Beach College to start over in College. At the College in Virginia she was almost failing some of her classes because of the noise and the parties her roommate held. She has been at South Beach College since her second semester of Freshman year and so far she has kept to herself so that she won't get distracted in college.

[rory moon]

i think i'm done. tell me if i missed anything.

[valentina shorz]

hey:)

So, firstly if you are not doing the second app, you should put up some more sentences explaining each personality trait.
Try to explain your first history paragraph a bit more, I got totally mixed up.
And finally about the names of her brother and her sister.
Rory, Tori and Cory. It's a bit too much ,try some different names for her sister and brother, they are too similar.

thanks:)
any questions?feel free to ask:)